Admission essay excerpt and outline for college.
Essay Question: Salt, governments, beliefs, and celebrity couples are a few examples of things that can be dissolved. You’ve just been granted the power to dissolve anything: physical, metaphorical, abstract, concrete you name it. What do you dissolve, and what solvent do you use?
Certain social and cultural norms continue to dictate gender inequality. One such example is the presence of communities in certain countries that prevent a woman from getting the healthcare she needs because it is taboo in her society to travel to a health clinic alone. This is just one example of the hundreds of cases wherein women are not allowed access to proper healthcare. As someone who is given the power to dissolve anything, I will dissolve gender inequality in healthcare access through re-education.
I believe that social and cultural norms that distort gender beliefs can be changed through proper education. As a young woman applying to college, I want to be a gynecologist and help re-educate people from different cultures regarding the importance of gender equality, especially in terms of proper health education and healthcare practices for women.
Outline
I. Introduction
A. Pervading issue of gender inequality in terms of healthcare access
B. Gender inequality as one issue I would like to dissolve and education as the solvent
C. The reason why I want to pursue a course in gynecology is to be a women’s healthcare professional who can help change the way people view certain cultural beliefs and norms in relation to proper healthcare access.
A. Pervading issue of gender inequality in terms of healthcare access
B. Gender inequality as one issue I would like to dissolve and education as the solvent
C. The reason why I want to pursue a course in gynecology is to be a women’s healthcare professional who can help change the way people view certain cultural beliefs and norms in relation to proper healthcare access.
II. My achievements as a student
A. As an active student, I’ve joined several extra-curricular groups that promote the preservation of cultural beliefs.
B. I’ve earned recognitions for my academic achievements.
C. Some of the clubs I’ve joined that promote physical and mental health among women include belly dancing, Indian dance, and Latin fitness.
D. My participation in several civic groups is a proof of my commitment to help others.
A. As an active student, I’ve joined several extra-curricular groups that promote the preservation of cultural beliefs.
B. I’ve earned recognitions for my academic achievements.
C. Some of the clubs I’ve joined that promote physical and mental health among women include belly dancing, Indian dance, and Latin fitness.
D. My participation in several civic groups is a proof of my commitment to help others.
III. Why I chose this school
A. Curriculum – The school offers an excellent curriculum that meets my educational needs as I achieve my goal.
B. Environment – The school has the perfect learning environment that will inspire me to do my best as I achieve my goal of becoming a gynecologist
C. Quality of education – The school is known for its high quality of education.
A. Curriculum – The school offers an excellent curriculum that meets my educational needs as I achieve my goal.
B. Environment – The school has the perfect learning environment that will inspire me to do my best as I achieve my goal of becoming a gynecologist
C. Quality of education – The school is known for its high quality of education.
