Sample essay using CHANGE as a theme

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I. The world is changing

a.  How I view changes
b.  Purpose of application

II.  Strategic Management Master program, Rotterdam school of management

a.  Reasons for choosing Strategic Management Master Program
b.  Reasons for selecting Rotterdam School of Management

III. Contribution

a.  Contribution to the institution
b.  Constribution to the society

IV. Problems faced

a.  Separated parents
b.  Weakness in writing

Sample essay:

Indeed, “the world is changing,” as the lyrics of my favorite song goes.  But is this change for the better?  I believe the answer depends on who asks the question.

Today, companies are growing fast and the ways we do business is changing as well.  New forms of doing business arise and business itself expands to an international scale.  I say that change is a good thing for me because I have always dreamed of working in a corporate landscape where healthy competitions and opportunities for development are everywhere.  I imagine myself working in a big consultancy company where I can meet challenges with real-time solutions, conceive ideas, and tap potentials that could help advance my career and contribute to my personal growth as a person and as a business professional.

I know that all these will someday turn into a reality with the help of a degree in Strategic Management Master Program of Rotterdam School of Management, Erasmus University.  This program will introduce me to the multi-faceted functions of a successful business enterprise.  It will also equip me with ideas and analytical tools that could me when I go further into the corporate world.

I chose the Rotterdam School of Management of Erasmus University in Europe because I want to pursue my education in a first-world country, where business success is legendary and almost everywhere.  I want to know how successful people and business corporations conduct business, using different types of effective strategies.  Erasmus University can provide me the education and training I need, as it is known for developing the minds of its students toward the fast-changing world.  The knowledge and skills I will acquire from the program will help me be a competent business leader in the arena of global development.

If the University deems me worthy to be nurtured under its wing, I can offer my experiences, knowledge, and skills to this institution and help create a more collaborative intellectual environment for us students.  I will use the training and experience in the University to help spread new ideas and continue to innovate as a free-thinking individual.  I hope that someday, I can help generate more jobs that offer decent wages to workers by seeking new and effective ways for the business to grow with help from Strategic Management.

I am confident that I can succeed in the program because I never stop dreaming and look at the positive ways to make life better.  Even if my parents got separated at my very young age, I didn’t see it as an obstacle.  There were difficult times, but I focused on the brighter side of things.  Although our family life has changed, it didn’t make me any less of a person.  I’m proud to say that my parents, though separated, worked together in making me a more confident and well-rounded individual.  They trust me to make my own decisions and go for the things that will make me a better person.  By putting so much faith in me, I don’t see failure as mere hindrance but also as a stepping stone.

Although writing this essay was a big challenge for me, since I don’t consider myself much of an articulate writer, I learned that with perseverance and dedication, there are ways to make things possible.  And I want to take my chance by getting the education I need to succeed in my chosen field.